Madame Archer.

SCIA

Archer. Beautiful and dangerous 🙂

https://www.behance.net/Akseley

Mario

Wow, gorgeous!

Nate

Really nice art and animations! I would say she could use some more facial expressions though, she looks a bit bored, like the girl from Parks and Recreation.

SCIA

Thank you. You are right. I was busy the overall animation and forgot about emotions. Will correct in the near future.

Erika

She's beautiful but I feel like she's a bit stiff in her secondary animations. I appreciate how you added that little 3D effets to her, but it's like she's a marionette rather than really breathing and moving (: amazing work though on the illustration side!

Søren

I'm having some serious issues with YouTube right now (on my phone). So I can't watch the video. But I'll give you some different critique instead. The character looks really great, but I think she would benefit a lot from a different hairstyle. Maybe a cool wild ponytail.
It would really help with the silhouette of her.

SCIA

Erikari đã viết
She's beautiful but I feel like she's a bit stiff in her secondary animations. I appreciate how you added that little 3D effets to her, but it's like she's a marionette rather than really breathing and moving (: amazing work though on the illustration side!

Thanks for the feedback. A very difficult task to animate a beautiful girl + in a realistic style (I mean the correct proportions) Any inaccuracy immediately noticeable. You, as a girl, especially visible all the flaws. Well, it is impossible to learn without mistakes, I will work more diligently 🙂

Shiu đã viết
I'm having some serious issues with YouTube right now (on my phone). So I can't watch the video. But I'll give you some different critique instead. The character looks really great, but I think she would benefit a lot from a different hairstyle. Maybe a cool wild ponytail.
It would really help with the silhouette of her.

I draw different hairstyles (in the sketch, only one survived). I wanted her eyes looking from the shadows... or wear a hood or come up with something with hair. For the animation looks spectacular flowing hair, for this stopped on this variant

here's another option, which has been preserved:

Søren

Looks cool.
Could give her a hood for the shadow on her eyes and a hole in the back where her hair can flow out.

By the way. It's your creation and I love it. Just critique 🙂

SCIA

Thanks for the criticism. 🙂
Of course, maybe you're right. I worked too long with this character, accustomed, and do not notice errors. Need take a break and return to it later in a few days

Maybe someone needs this character:
https://www.assetstore.unity3d.com/en/#!/content/74015

jeffreynuez

Nice work. You've made some pretty great characters and I was hoping to know if you make decent money from selling your characters in the unity's asset store.